- Erotic Poetry
- Non-orientable surfaces
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When our ends
are brought together
with a twist
every taking away
is a revealing
every addition
is a revelation
together,
outside and inside
become meaningless.
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The title of this poem was intended to be:
Pleasure and other non-orientable surfaces
but I ran up against the 35 character title limit.
- COMMENTS
Lyricalliover 3 years agoI enjoy erotica that makes you think and work for it just a bit.
The only bit that hangs me up a little is the repetition of "is a." It's purely my preference in the way I want to read it, but this sounds better to my ear:
every taking away
is revealing
every addition
a revelation
Glad to see another submission. Always enjoy your writing.
