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Lyricalliover 3 years agoThis is lovely
I enjoy erotica that makes you think and work for it just a bit.
The only bit that hangs me up a little is the repetition of "is a." It's purely my preference in the way I want to read it, but this sounds better to my ear:
every taking away
is revealing
every addition
a revelation
Glad to see another submission. Always enjoy your writing.
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Levitating_Bed@Levitating_Bed“I tried hard to imagine my poems or any poems as machines that could make things happen, changing the government, or the economy or even their language, the body or its sensorium, but I could not imagine this, could not even imagine imagining it. And yet when I imagined the ...
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