All Comments on 'Not to care'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Well done!

You first poem! It's interesting - shows your confusion, I think. Perhaps a bit untidy. Maybe trim it a bit, use fewer words.

Keep writing, you've taken the fist hurdle. Well done!

normal jeannormal jeanalmost 20 years ago
good job

hope to see you posting more and more... :)

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