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by jillieb

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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 13 years ago
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Well done liked it a lot especially the last line

donaldedonaldeabout 13 years ago
cool

interesting poem short and sweet nicely done

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
nice

change from the others. the best line is the third, all simple words, new writer 5.

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