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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
IF THE HANDS COULD PAINT

what the sky reveals. TK U MLJ LV NV

AngelineAngelineover 11 years ago
Also 5ed this poem

It seems like the perfect companion piece to your other submission. Have you considered putting them together somehow? Maybe as Parts 1 and 2?

Thank you for the read. Really a lovely, spare piece.

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