All Comments on 'Ode to a Cyber Queen'

Simply dreadful! zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

This isn't awful. Perhaps it doesn't appeal to anonymous in its use of simple rhyme and meter, but those devices are used well in this little verse of fun. Lighten up anonymous, all poetry doesn't have to be written by a Poet Laureate to be worthy of finding a way into your brain box. I suppose you think your zzzzzzz is more poetic and profound? I think its pure laziness on your part. You could at least be constructive in your critique.

Loved your poem Skip, it's as sexy and naughty as ever! A fun and saucy read x

As for anonymous, you comment is not only childish and pathetic, it's unwelcome and not in the least bit taken notice off! Go back to your colouring book, you clearly no nothing about writing!