All Comments on 'Ode to a One Night Stand'

Interesting poem, and a five, but the first line should be:

lying in bed at night,

.......too much information here but glimmers of greater things. The last stanza would be just fine all on its own. Cut all the messy green things and the border line porn but save that last verse. It might have been 5 if you'd just submitted that alone....

Tess

Thank you for pointing that out! I can't believe I didn't notice it!

As a woman who has "been there" I feel the authenticity of your writing, and it is beautiful in it's truth, no matter the subject, this is real, this is beauty. Also I have downloaded 3 of your books so far to my Kindle and I am definitely a FAN!!!