All Comments on 'Ode to the water of life'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

May be how I felt last night,

But this morning I want nothing

More potent than ice cold water.

bluerainsbluerainsover 17 years ago
Great way

to shout to the new year...more passion...may the universe comply..nicely written...bluerains ~ you have been mentioned on the review thread at the forum board...ty

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
thirst

Sipping the delicious nectar of your love ~ consume you - drain you I must. Another round ~ of love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
gentle words

and a pleasure to read them

maria

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