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by seannelson

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
This is nuts

and I conclude that you must be nuts as well. Seriously, though, this is a hyperkinetic poem which was probably written by someone with too much caffeine.

Thanks for the read, mentioned in today's new poem reviews

lobomaolobomaoalmost 18 years ago
el lobomao loves this poem

Across the table of comments

I see your thousand mile stare

Not at me but at the island no man is

And how you freestyle frolic there

Having had the haves I had

Looking now to throw them all away

I wish I could beach back coconut roll

Catch a breathe of your clock kilter knitting

To live life back another day

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Wild ride

I like the new language you've invented. I understood it! Scary. Some good imagery here.

Tess

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