All Comments on 'Old age love'

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Christina O. LeighChristina O. Leighover 19 years ago
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I like what you're saying here, but be careful when you're talking about him as in "we" then going back to "you" again. Keep it the same.

No harm meant.

Christina

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
whats in a name?

cute and endearing...witty wording to develope the speakers charm...grin~

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