All Comments on 'Old Flames'

I like it but if you worked it over I think it would be better. i.e.,Art Museum instead of Natural H, age conflict is jarring, did the romance rekindle 20 years later? the sifted remain? how romantic an arrow head? maybe a lipstick color, a used condom, a sweater with her/his sent? anyway I 5vd it

Alice Granche