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by Cordelia

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duckiesmutduckiesmutover 19 years ago
this line...

caught and held me:

a touch of inhibition, sapphire blue

Lovely...just lovely.

Lalenya LoveLalenya Lovealmost 20 years ago
A Gem of a Sonnet

Beautiful and sparkling! Your writing truly shines! Please continue to submit quality poems such as this one.

Cheers,

Lalenya :^)

BooMerengueBooMerenguealmost 20 years ago
!

I can do this... I can do this... I KNOW I can do this...

Thanks Cordy! Its terriffic!

BelilicaBelilicaover 20 years ago
Oh my...

The words just roll off your tongue. So incredibly sensual.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
wonderful

cordelia

you have wonderful talent.

it's so inspiring

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