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lonelyhousewife32lonelyhousewife32about 11 years ago

So beautiful, makes me feel good inside, nice first submission.

momokapeachmomokapeachabout 11 years agoAuthor

I just got around to seeing the two responses to my poem, sorry for not responding sooner! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. It was my intention to make you feel good while reading it, whether in a sexual sense or not. Thank you for reading.

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
Synchronization....

When two hearts beat as one..... Truly a special moment.... Nicely penned...QQ

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