All Comments on 'One Man's Trash'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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That infamous shop

where things and

little bits of soul

are sold...

sacksackover 18 years ago
I can picture this shop...

a very vivid description makes this mythical shop come to life. Excellent!

lobomaolobomaoover 18 years ago
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a small list

of needful things

we haggle over

and over again

discarded memories

we once thought

too precious

to ever let anyone hold

five dollar

i give you good luck price

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
weaves...

quite the tale as to the pawn shop. i enjoyed how worked the theme. i'll be sure not to visit a pawn shop anytime soon....nicely done......don

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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Oh, this was great! It reminded me of all the pawn shops in Allentown, Pa, but I never expected that ending! Well done!

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