All Comments on 'Only You'

by Savannah Skye

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
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I really liked the way it started and could almost be two poems here, the first was jumping in to the two which was cool then it opened up into the depths of a certain situation that was cleverly written, but I like the one poem that seemed like two poems, wow ...only you ...only me ...I see <grin>

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
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Loved the conflicting emotions expressed throughout.

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
nice work

you convey your emotions

well, a nice piece.

thanks.

~ J

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