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erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
too many trite images*, cunt-ry western? ( which I love)

it is cute and trite and if Mindy had not shot herself she could sing it, perhaps too personal for an audience, give us something better, I know if you try you can do it.

If this is too harsh I'm sorry, nothing personal here, I hope not to offend.

*i.e.

"My tears could quench an inferno

My fiery flames of need

You alone can quench my flames

a living Hell

Heaven on earth

Only you can really make me smile

You make me whole

I feel completed "

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