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by demure101

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SweetOblivionSweetOblivionover 11 years ago
Quite a mix in that cauldron of yours

but the points you make, although a little confused and obscure, are well made in the end. And the metre and rhythm are, as ever, perfect. M

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years ago
Today it can also be ....

The state , the media & commerce ?! Excellent --5 ed !

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 11 years ago

The first sentence sets the tone for colloquial, but "pretty pass" is an idiomatic expression that, I don't think, is very familiar to most, so the first line felt a little like trying to mix oil and water together, at least to me. That said, I love the second line. It prompted me to take it further to "toil and trouble."

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
SHOULD HAVE ASKED DORIS DAY

the sages do not have all knowledge only answers to questions, TK U MLJ LV NV

HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years ago
Nice Sonnet

I choose the people

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