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All Comments on 'Orchid Promised to the Sun'

by jd4george

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Another experimentation?

Or is this a form that I do not know, (repeating line counts of 6-8-5-8-5)? Some nice images, though.

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Thick with literary reference

I needed several reads to take it all in! Strong imagery and structure, JD4G.

PatCarringtonPatCarringtonover 19 years ago
does not seem expeimental to me.

i'm not sure i understand the reason for the ellipses / but they do not provide an obstacle for me / the softness of the words is something only a skilled poet can achieve /

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