by DawnJ
i mentioned your poem in the new poem review thread in the poetry forum: http://forum.literotica.com:81/showthread.php?p=23167718#post23167718
- wildsweetone
This one left me breathing a little harder...
And it's interesting too; at different parts of the poem I could have sworn ir was written from a woman pov, then it is obviosly a man...I guess it makes it an absolutely erotic poem...