by Lauren Hynde
A poem in negative space. I liked it. "Zen me again, baby! Harder! Harder!"
The "who what or where game" from the 60's. I'll take the WHAT question please! Thought provoking!!
Sack
a well-constructed poem. It's a delight to read, either to onseself or aloud. It's relatively simple construction belies the complex yet smooth flow. Beautifully done.
and the way they lie together, urges me to read your poem several times. Okay, I had the urge. I read several times. Lovely sounding poem. Flows smoothly like long hairs on a leg. Really beautifully written.
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