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foehnfoehnover 19 years agoAuthor
[edited since original posting]

I've edited this poem since first submitting it. Where there were once semicolons, there are now spaces. It's less "semicolon happy" now... but gappy! LOL

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
really nice :)

In my opinion, much more poetic than Beginning the Journey. The poem is a little semicolon happy, though. :)

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