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by Maydaypilot

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elizalooelizalooalmost 2 years ago

Your imagery is unparalleled.

Paul4playPaul4playalmost 2 years ago

Wow!

Exceptionally well done!

Incendiary!

RiverMayaRiverMayaalmost 2 years ago

This is erotic poetry at its most sublime. Bravo!

swiftlytiltingswiftlytiltingalmost 2 years ago

Ahhhh. There's so much about this that I love. It's achingly beautiful. Oh, to be experience such adoration and exquisite sensation, to be shattered upon hardness, to become "shimmering shards dancing doubtless in flames’ immolation"! The ending is perfect and satisfying, such peaceful fulfillment and joy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Stunning work!xx

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowalmost 2 years ago

Errrotic! Rolling on one's tongue and in one's mind.

raven_rose_auraven_rose_aualmost 2 years ago

As always, You take my breath away!

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Truly appreciate the comments and feedback. Why we write.

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Older male. Natural beauty addict. I love. I feel the hard and soft, in most things. I know real and grace, and embrace them. I need to write, and strive to write well, to reach my reader. Flawed, flying blind, but still flying. I value feedback from ratings, public a...