All Comments on 'Over: Fuck and Get'

as if you left something out, like "Out" as in "Fuck and Get Out." "Barraged" is kind of a strange word--I'm not quite sure what that's supposed to mean. Maybe "lay" (in line 14) should be "laid" (the context seems to be past tense)?<p>

I am not sure you want these kind of comments, as this seems to be very much a "vent" kind of poem, and so kind of above or outside of criticism.