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by Kaitlin45

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Well done...

....but try reading your poems aloud to yourself and tapping out the rythmn as you do. That way you get a feel for the beat and you'll get a smoother scan. Your rhyming is spot on tho'.

Keep writing and posting, I'll be looking for your work.

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