All Comments on 'Palette'

I have moon poem envy

wonderfully romantic and says alot for so few words..

I especially loved the first 4 lines, think you might be able to jump to the red moon reflection line and then end it there....

enjoyed this!

thanks for playing`

Great language, the colors placed just right...

Very visual and seductive read.

Excellent work

...I wonder, having read your recent poems, what will happen when you again move beyond relying on colors. I mention this only as a warning about a rut we all fall into.