All Comments on 'Passed By Without a Glance'

A nice little verse

fiendishly wrought

sending my mind into overdrive

in thinking how

those two little words

can't be made to rhyme

really fun read! I like this a lot. It just needs a teeny bit of tightening meter wise (I'm kind of a nut about that) and then it'll be perfect!

Thanks,

Boo

very fun and quick and enjoyable

And a real day brightener! Thank you!

silver-ish orange-gish

yep clever write~

Liked it even more than

part 1.

Nice work,

thanks.

~ J