- Erotic Poetry
- Passionate Anger
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TENSE. RESTLESSNESS.
THINKING. FEELING.
ANGER. ANNOYANCE.
TAKE ME. USE ME.
SHOW ME. DOMINATE ME.
BEAT MY ASS. MAKE IT RED.
FUCK ME. HARD. HARDER.
DON'T STOP. MAKE ME CRY OUTLOUD.
MAKE ME FEEL YOU. MAKE ME KNOW THAT IT IS YOU.
MAKE ME CUM. FILL ME WITH YOURS.
HOLD ME CLOSE. HOLD ME TENDERLY.
LET ME KNOW THAT YOU CARE.
- COMMENTS
sunshinegirl05over 11 years agoAuthorThat's what I thought, BBB. You have to look at what the writing is about...and read it in that mindset...in my opinion.
sunshinegirl05over 11 years agoAuthor@RickyChampagne Thank you...and yes you have. I'm glad you still enjoy it!
sunshinegirl05almost 12 years agoAuthorWhen I wrote this piece, I felt anger and frustration. This was the way it came out...and I felt that this was the only way it could be written.
Thank you for reading, critiquing, and voting on it. I do appreciate hearing people's opinions.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoPOST YOUR WORK IN ALL CAPS. IT IS ONLINE RUDENESS AND MADE ME WANT TO GIVE YOU A 1, I DIDN'T, BUT SHOULD HAVE
njoyndesirealmost 12 years agoHey ...
I can really relate to the feeling in this... and there's nothing better than being wrapped in their arms after coming down from that place.
sunshinegirl05almost 12 years agoAuthorThank you guys!!!! I really could not see this poem written or changed any other way.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoYou can feel her anger and passion coming through this poem. It's unusal in that it's shouting out to the reader, but that's the whole purpose isn't it? I liked it the first time I read it. I liked it when I edited it and now that it's published and out there for public consumption I love it.
You are so brave. I'm glad you stuck to your guns.
