All Comments on 'Peace'

I really liked these words...

If I have to give you a piece of myself

then let it be this. A smile to hold and cover

the dark days. A hug to surrender yourself into.

To shoulder your pains and cries of disbelief

as loneliness swamps in and tries to take you down.

the gift of one's self is the greatest gift of all, next to winning the lottery I suppose <grin, a very nice write (~_*)in my opinion!

this poem was mention on the thread 'New Poem Reviews'

thanks for the literary journey (~_~)

We leave pieces of ourselves with every life we touch. And I can assure you, you've touched mine.

Very touching piece

Of connections made that remain eternal

Though broken;

Heartbreak's pain will fade ~ we let it;

Love's joys we nurture and cherish

And leaves us all as hopeless romantics...

Touching in subject. Well presented. Thank you

Hugo