All Comments on 'Pearls to Pour'

In poetry, close is aka "half-ass" attempt. You have it in you to do much better and after so MANY years on this site, seems like some of the real talent in the forum would have rubbed off onto you, M'Dear. Sadly, that talent has moved on to escape the likes of the snobs and attention whores. Keep up the excellent attempts. You ARE getting "closer"

of images, a nice

read.

thanks.

~ J

Shakespearean style and <pardon the pun> an easy flowing one at that. This was a pearl of a poem, Judo. Thank you! <smile>

Vixxx

flow of nice images.

poetry pour, ...bows humble (~_~)

poor poet. almost does not count my dear

I once knew a girl named Judo who could rhyme so sweetly...

One line jars

"Jam runneth over 'til the box cries "More!""

pardon the pun, in the context, it jars