All Comments on 'Perfect Line'

I love the details you've put in this poem, creating a wonderful scene in the readers' mind.

The lines 'I thumb through indices, check zoning codes

and heiroglyph a bridge or streetcar rail. ' stand out for me here

p.s your poem has been mentioned in today's new poem reviews

hey hey welcome Kelvin! we welcome your heat hope you stick around, enjoy the view.

thanks for sharing your poem with us, much enjoyed!

my friend.

Love your imagery and imagination.

You pulled us in and held close

your vision tunneled

to zero in ... on your pen ~

Nice one at that ~ Welcome to Lit ~

More Please~

singularly appropriate here, Lord K. This is a wonderful sonnet. As others have said, no forced rhyme, and the theme (most of my family are engineers) touches particularly close to home.

One minor fault: "hieroglyph" is misspelled.

Welcome.

seem (or seam) effortlessly is a true talent. Thank you, Rainy, for pointing this out. Great job, Mr. 373. More sonnets, please.

Calli

I'll just mimick Calli here.

More, please.

And welcome to Lit. :)