All Comments on 'phantom pains'

I could feel your phantom pain, and this line especially stuck me-

"lost to surgical steal long ago",

very imaginative, youre a lot stronger than you look sweet lady

...but one. Why "black and white"? Something a little more oblique would tie into the "phantomness"... maybe referring back to the preceding verse?

Still, a wonderful read.

has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

a very nicely thought out and structured poem / some very vivid images / far superior to your second poem, i think