All Comments on 'Pickle In My Pocket'

by sandspike

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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Or perhaps a Vegan

Will dance to a different beat

Once she samples your pickle...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Ah!

The double entendre at it's best. Making a note to try these as pick-up lines. Food talk is sexy. Nice poem, SS.

Tess

Maria2394Maria2394about 18 years ago
i like pickles

and your poetry:) thanks for making me smile

bluerainsbluerainsabout 18 years ago
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*mentioned on today's review*

a few years back the Landsharks were very active around my area...they are so...timeless just like the beach boys...I think we are getting pickled with age...sigh...blue

WickedEveWickedEveabout 18 years ago
Vlasic?

Cute poem. Love the lines about I got some greens in my pocket and Beach Boys playing in Kokomo

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