All Comments on 'Pink'

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WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
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This was kind of like reading "she sells seashells by the seashore." ;) Fun read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
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Interesting in the form and the flow of the work. When we envision pink Innocence arises.. but here you speak of the other side of innocence.. bringing together a natural balance of innocence and physicality. A good read.. and one that makes me think..

Du Lac~

Mentioned in the Sunday reviews

ishtatishtatabout 19 years ago
Goodun

I really enjoyed this it reads well especially if you slur the words a bit - as though you have had a couple of pink gins.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Can erotica ...............

.............be bouncy? This was. Loved it Liar, as usual.

Tess

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenabout 19 years ago
I never thought of pink...

in so many sultry ways before! You have penned {and driven} new images of "think pink" into My brain <grin>. Nicely done, Liar - this poetry in pink.

Vixxx

dcpoet44dcpoet44about 19 years ago
nice overlay....

in pink throughout this, but yet it is even throughout in its portrayal. nice work!!....don

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
This poem...

had me tickled pink. Great word play that almost reads like a tongue twister.

evelyn_carrollevelyn_carrollabout 19 years ago
Alliterotication

You just made me invent a new word!

Maria2394Maria2394about 19 years ago
tickkled me...

dare i be punny and say, pink? naaah, good poem Liar, I love the way you make the words all twisty in my head, feels good!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
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Oh wow! That's all I can say.

Okay, maybe impressed as another. Very!!

Anonymous
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