by Liar
This was kind of like reading "she sells seashells by the seashore." ;) Fun read.
Interesting in the form and the flow of the work. When we envision pink Innocence arises.. but here you speak of the other side of innocence.. bringing together a natural balance of innocence and physicality. A good read.. and one that makes me think..
Du Lac~
Mentioned in the Sunday reviews
I really enjoyed this it reads well especially if you slur the words a bit - as though you have had a couple of pink gins.
.............be bouncy? This was. Loved it Liar, as usual.
Tess
in so many sultry ways before! You have penned {and driven} new images of "think pink" into My brain <grin>. Nicely done, Liar - this poetry in pink.
Vixxx
in pink throughout this, but yet it is even throughout in its portrayal. nice work!!....don
had me tickled pink. Great word play that almost reads like a tongue twister.
dare i be punny and say, pink? naaah, good poem Liar, I love the way you make the words all twisty in my head, feels good!