All Comments on 'Please Don't Kill Me...'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Thanks for sharing this tale that's much too common - if it weren't, we wouldn't be so familiar with it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
yes..a commonality

*mentioned on today's review

which touches all of us through friendships and family...why is it that one has to feel they own another just because they share their lives...ownership is the biggest reason the picket fence world will never work...great pen...blue

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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A tale that brings me to close to my former self. Far too many have not been graced as I have to know the taste of freedoms breath. Thank you Sack for reminding all the cost of possession.

Du Lac~

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
....

*nods slowly, silently leaves a rose*

E

Honey123Honey123over 18 years ago
*shakes head

so very sad.... and unfortunately happens to more women then we are aware of.

~Honey

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Geesh Sack

I'm glad that wasn't your Christmas contribution. Very sad and it happens all too often.

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
WOW...

I really did not know

where you were going with

this, though my mind was

racing as fast as the page

would allow, and the words

flowed all to fast..

to BANG ... and .....gone.

DAMN SACK !!!

was not expecting that,

and yet I have felt that before,

a long time ago..

very sad indeed..

-sGp-

bearleebearleeover 18 years ago
Fuck

I have to deal with shit like this, or close to it alot-damn good piece of writing Sack! Some pretty sad shit people have to deal with and you brought home something I think people are aware of but more need to be!

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
wowser.....

and very strong here. touching know doubt and with very real circumstances......nicely done.......don

saw_man1saw_man1over 18 years ago
Lived it

i lived this

as a child

every payday

it still hurts

oregon_galoregon_galover 18 years ago
Chilling

I had to stop and re read....chilling.

LadyCibelleLadyCibelleover 18 years ago
Atrocious.

Yes....that's an atrocious fate.

*sighs and leaves crying*

LC

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
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This poem begs an answer to this question - Where does love go when a family is in crisis?

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