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by RhymeFairy

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Really good {and deep}; it seems that the phrase, "messed up visions" doesn't quite fit with the other phrases you've used here. The only slightly jarring note in an otherwise fine piece of writing.

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