by Liar
You've captured so perfectly those post (post post!) coital moments. You share with the reader your private moments in such a way that allows them to feel as if they aren't invading, but rather invited in to share those privy moments between lovers; In so doing, you've allowed the reader to remember their own similar moments. Nicely done. Fun, playful, familiar, tender-- these are all the emotions your poem has evoked.
The voyeur in me likes intimate images like this one. The poet just likes the set up of words. Good stuff.