All Comments on 'posture pedic'

Again, some fine phrasing. I almost had a doubt about the title but on second thought, naming it <i>pasture pedic</i> comes off as trivializing the poem with a rather cutesy title; leave it as is.

the title should have been "Pasture Pedic."...But never the less it was an interesting poem, thanks.

that was different. And nicely done.