All Comments on 'pour me on your pillow'

by steve porter

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WickedEveWickedEveover 20 years ago
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I wrote a poem about a man leaving his scent on his lover's pillow. So, when I saw the title I was anxious to see your version of a pillow poem.

I'm not as wild about rhyme as I once was, but this is pretty good. :)

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 20 years ago
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"and share the air you breathe"

I am so in love with this concept.

I want to use it in every thing I write...

glad to see it used in a nicely phrased line

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