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All Comments on 'Prehistoric Premonition'

by RhymeFairy

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
This poem evolves

much like the person in it. From primal to present day Nice word selection. Maybe a bit too much alliteration towards the end, detracting from the content. Overall an interesting read.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
excellent

a perfect pen of poetry from the heart! I always enjoy the visions you paint with words. (~_*)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
enjoyable

use of words and you tied it together well...luv the alliteration...smiles...blue

MyNecroticSnailMyNecroticSnailabout 18 years ago
I Love Prehistoric!!!!!!!!!!!!!

enjoin your rite <winkz

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