All Comments on 'Prelude To A Kneeling'

Nice write

hot, right off

the bat

vivid scene plays

behind my eyes

as i look down lovingly

at the top of his head

this is great,

but now i am obsessed

with getting blown.

great read!!!!!!! thanks!

I loved the opening line, absolutely brilliant, and the ending was rather good. Carved out of your unique wit and humor, which makes all your poems rather worth reading :D

is a comment with no substance but a high score

some people here believe that is all you should leave

Guess it had too many big words for the other guy<Winkz