All Comments on 'Pretty Annie'

Popular Beauty !!! 5-ed

Even a dust-covered violin has a beautiful song to sing.

With Oneiria. Even when it comes from within, through older skin, beauty is still beauty and has much to do with the woman's own attitude. Nicely done Demure

good

green velvet, grey with mould, left to itself

not so

while in the inmost regions of her mind

the violin motif excellent

but crashes to an over used end

despite what I just said. one of the better ones, but we all know that 5ed

"They called her pretty Annie then. She knew

her wishes and they all came true

until the gloss wore off."

Five.

Neat trick with "violin's."

Mixed feelings about the last 3 lines. Of course, excluding them would have changed the poem, perhaps more to my liking if not yours.