All Comments on 'Primavera'

Very nice word play and imagery, like a nice sauce.

I like this. It's simple and sweet, but I particularly like this line:

"Carrots and peppers and bright yellow squash, spinning in the air like fireworks."

Nice.

I rarely on this erotic site read poetry, but I've read both of yours that you've posted and I have been, in different ways, transported by both. And of course I will now try the recipe. I'm not, nor do I speak Italian, but google says "ti ringrazio tanto", means Thank you very much. As Elvis would say. Be well and write a lot more please.

Simple description and very well executed.

Lovely quiet erotica...Thank You

Nicely done.

Delicious. My guess, being born with a spout, is that most women will get this more than if you had words eviking the 'wubbly bits'. Nicely done...and a poem that can travel anywhere.