All Comments on 'Pulse'

barely, just below the jawline...this looks great, and the stark and curt, may i say-words hit me like a bullet.

well, well done 2d.

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i mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum - wildsweetone

I clicked this open and had to lean back away from the screen for a moment, then get a better look. Great image. Perfect for the words you added.

At first, I'd think the text was too small, but with the art, the words are giant. Tight and big impact, just the way I like illustrated poems. Thanks.

Superbly done juxtaposition of the metaphorical and the literal shown with this illustrated piece as passion and feeling are replaced by the mechanical.

to the roar of the engine. TK U MLJ LV NV