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Click hereSuperbly done juxtaposition of the metaphorical and the literal shown with this illustrated piece as passion and feeling are replaced by the mechanical.
At first, I'd think the text was too small, but with the art, the words are giant. Tight and big impact, just the way I like illustrated poems. Thanks.
I clicked this open and had to lean back away from the screen for a moment, then get a better look. Great image. Perfect for the words you added.
i mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum - wildsweetone
barely, just below the jawline...this looks great, and the stark and curt, may i say-words hit me like a bullet.
well, well done 2d.
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