All Comments on 'Queen of the Sex Castle'

by Keannalee

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Okay, but that first strophe needs a bit of fixing up from:

"As the sun sets in the horizon

As the moon lits up the sky

I fill so shy as you feel me tonight"

to:

"As the sun sets on the horizon

As the moon lights up the sky

I feel so shy as you feel me tonight"

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
reduction

Total surrender ~ from a Queen to a Slave.

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