All Comments on 'rain closet'

Very hot n staemy one here. Your imagery sizzles. The lathering..mmmmm.. Just great.. *Fans Self*~~ *grins*

More please~~

and thanks for mentioning some of my poems in your Saturday review! It is appreciated! Sack

PS- mezmerising= mesmerizing (I think!)

A very vivid description, the words come alive for me. Very good.

I agree.. very vivid with a rush of words.. Nice work.

in Sunday's New Poems Review.

P.S.- This item is on sale this week at the Home depot nearest you...;)

Art..

loved the rich images here.

clouding mist

pelting rain

draining strain

As you know I like short powerful and alluring rhetoric in poems... this is an excellent example of leading the reader into the realm..

Lathering... feeling the water... pelting on ones skin.. very erotic. Thank you for the ride

Du Lac

Really good poem. :)

I do love the feel of water on my bare skin, the fragrant smells of soap and lotion....Mmmm...I really enjoyed this poem

Oh, hot damn!!

hOOt hOOt

It's another work of art from Art..

Great images. mmm mm mm