- Erotic Poetry
- rain closet
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Click hereclouding mist
pelting rain
draining strain
engrossed in jeweled 'drum'lets'
mezmerizing likeliness
of a meteor showers awe
naked to the confined world
wistful, dust to dust can still wash
flesh cleansed while burdens still bare
overwelming fresh fragrant aroma
racing lather in showered dreams
messaging perplexion streams
the refreashing cubical
spraying delight from a faucet
inside the rain closet
- COMMENTS
Honey123over 19 years agoI do love the feel of water on my bare skin, the fragrant smells of soap and lotion....Mmmm...I really enjoyed this poem
Du Lacover 19 years agoArt..
loved the rich images here.
clouding mist
pelting rain
draining strain
As you know I like short powerful and alluring rhetoric in poems... this is an excellent example of leading the reader into the realm..
Lathering... feeling the water... pelting on ones skin.. very erotic. Thank you for the ride
Du Lac
tungtied2uover 19 years agoin Sunday's New Poems Review.
P.S.- This item is on sale this week at the Home depot nearest you...;)
sackover 19 years agoand thanks for mentioning some of my poems in your Saturday review! It is appreciated! Sack
PS- mezmerising= mesmerizing (I think!)
