All Comments on 'Rainbow Needs'

I agree with Maria's comment. Very well done. My only quibble is S6L4, "living life" seems redundant to me.

This would be one of my picks of the day. First of all, I absolutely LOVE the way you used your adjectives following the subject- that technique shows thought, preparation and a unique understanding of the way words can be used in a way other than the boring usual way.

I loved these lines-

~I seek orange for passion hot

~I seek yellow for secrets shared and

~I seek violet for quietness gained

You could have made this a trite, boring poem but you didn't and it is a great piece of work. Keep up the good work and don't let go of that muse!!!!!

~ maria