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annaswirls almost 17 years ago

man

I hope the lack of comments is not discouraging to you and that you continue to share your work at Lit as I am selfishly enjoying myself. Come over to the Poet's Forum and join us there! Many people read work in threads there and do not get over to the New Poems (at least that is my story!)

best-

Anna

normal jean almost 17 years ago

as far as being written

well, you did a great job. You have "what it takes" to make it writing, but personally, I felt like it was over-edited and sort of sterile.

I would like to see something from you , equally as well-pared but with some emotion attached.

keep writing!