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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
loved it!

right up to the last line. Somehow that one is not working for me. Needs a stronger ending for this steamy, well-written poem.

~Syn

dcpoet44dcpoet44about 19 years ago
agrees.....

with syn 100%. you have good imagery in this. nice job!!...don

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